Well first of all very realistic. A gamer like Lauren would definitely want some break time, with chips and soda and all that stuff. Next, We see the nice glow of the TV--and the nice light reflecting off of Lauren, so kudos for that. Thirdly, Lauren's expression is just right-- confused, but not too confused, just confused enough to tell us she doesn't really know much about gaming. The pillow is an interesting addition (instead of having her sitting on a sofa), perhaps hinting that she is in her spacious basement playing this game. Anyhow, overall very nice colorings, cool glows and dark shadows, and nice pony-fication. I'll give this a one hundred out of one hundred rating score on my scale (regardless of the DeviantArt Critique scale)